OK for those who want to listen.
Let's do it girl by girl. Considering if the girls match the story told.
Girls next door, do their own thing and making their own porn for the fun of it and some money.
Top left girl, does she fit that profie?
Top right might.
Central blond looks bored and posed.
Bottom left is a babe and could be a fountain of cash. If she didn't look like she was about to burst into tears.
Bottom left is teasing me.
!-5 done right.
Top two look unhappy.
middle blond is OK, but it's an ass. Can you really get that wrong?
Bottom left is good, bottom right is eyes and perfect. al the girls should have eyes open and eager like her. The other girl is fine.
Top 4, two good 2 bad.
The locations look more like my studio than my home.
Brian will never get it because he's like so clever he is a god. For those lesser beings here's some things to think about.
Understand and research the product. If it's Penthouse, you need a location, clothing, make up, model, etc. THAT screams up Penthouse.
If it's Girl Next Door. you need location, clothing, make up, model, etc. THAT screams up Girl next door.
So what is GND? Amateur, doing it for kicks, bit of cash, fun, sex and the type of girl who lives next door to you and might just fuck you. What she must never look like is a girl who is unhappy, not willing, bored, or doing it for money, locations have to change and look like they were shot in a home, in my opinion Photoshopping the background out, isn't something GND girls would do, Brian probably did it because of his lack of locations.
Getting the images to match the text is essential in selling anything. When selling something visual, people will look at the images first and then the text. IF after seeing the images they're still interested.
Of course Brian doesn't need such advice, because he knows it all.