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Originally Posted by Paul Markham
They are shit at keeping to their own rules or just want my money. The Christian, Jewish and Islamic are the worse.
The Ten Commandments are the most often broken. They kill, rape, steal to their hearts content.
The fundamental reason of religions is to control and steal. In the guise of selling you a ticket to a place that's a myth. Unless someone can prove to me heaven does exist, I'm assuming it's a con trick.
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Errors:
*worst not "worse"
*hearts' content not "hearts content"
*for religions not "of religions"
*"In the guise of selling you a ticket to a place that's a myth." is a fragment. get rid of the period after "steal" and make the "I" in "In" lowercase to combine the two sentences into one good sentence.
*a "con" is a trick already. You shouldn't add redundancy.
You're right about religion, but you're also a self-important twit. No offense.