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Old 07-07-2012, 11:32 PM  
Paul Markham
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OK here are some tips.

Girls look better with their lips slightly parted, it emphasises the lips and mouth.

Soft shadow is nice, harsh shadow not.

Naked girl behind bars making an inverted V sign. This I simply don't get the message. Any one else considering all the aspects?

The two girls behind bars, to make the picture have impact both girls need to be seen. The picture lacks emotion.

Guard whipping naked girl is out of focus, should be the other way around. She's grinning at the camera while the other seems a bit lost.

Two girls in a bar waiting for a bus!!

Head shot, simple and nice. Lips parted would make it right.

Then three OK ones

Hospital one, why the silly smiles. BTS shot maybe.

I post this as advice to anyone who will listen. Damian still can't tell the difference between shooters when the styles are clearly different. His comments on shooting are pointless.
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