plsureking

ah i stand corrected. since it was in quotes and was written as a letter it looked like it was cut and pasted from an email. you introduced it by saying:

that was a lot of posts and grief over nothing. you should have mentioned right away that it wasn't sent. i had to contact the client to investigate.

back to the point: cleaning up the photos and homepage layout sounds good but your edit of her intro copy cuts out all of this selling speech - "Read below to learn how and why and about all the benefits of VIP Membership. You'll get instant, unlimited access to all of my content (100's of hardcore vids and pics) and you can try it all out today - no risk and no obligation" - and replaces it with a vague sentence about "changing your game".

she didnt say she would change the visitor's game, she is changing the online porn game. and she does this quite well. her marketing angle is that she is a virtual girlfriend. she even gives members her private cell number and lets them text her anytime. your changes pull her away from this marketing goal and try to brand her site as a generic solo site.

this is why i said you should stay away from marketing and stick solely to content. unless you understand her marketing plan, which you did not in this case, you cannot help shape it or execute it. she has spent 2 years getting to this point and she now knows that this marketing plan sells the best. you want to misdirect her after spending a few minutes on her site?

i have no comment about your content comments, as its not my area. i will say she has thousands of hours of video on the site and also broadcasts a webcam 24 hours a day. i think trying to make that much film perfect would be a waste of time, although you may know ways she can improve without much effort.

i can send your letter to her if you'd like, since you made the effort to write it. i will just cut out the first paragraph. you will have to give me a reply-to address also so i dont have to be in the middle of it...

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