GoFuckYourself.com - Adult Webmaster Forum - View Single Post - It's harder to shoot porn today than it was back in the old days.

Paul Markham · 09-11-2011, 07:42 AM

Here it is.

Quote:

http://www.lelulove.com/

Hi there. Ryan said I wasn't able to give you some ideas on your site. So had to pick up the challenge, hope you don't mind. Here's some of my thoughts. Would love to know what you think of them.

Clearly you're a very attractive girl, sexy and intelligent enough to create a site that works.
Great site and if I were buying I would be buying a membership. Too old now, just wish I wasn't. LOL

The first page with the out take was different and good, got any more out takes? Not for the tour, inside the site. Members like to know it doesn't always go right.

Only things I found to say about the front page were the pictures at the top weren't showing right, the tops were cut off. I suspect that's my browser, might want to get the webmaster to test it on different versions or browser.

And this phrase.

I'm Lelu Love, and I'm here to change the game. Read below to learn how and why and about all the benefits of VIP Membership. You'll get instant, unlimited access to all of my content (100's of hardcore vids and pics) and you can try it all out today - no risk and no obligation

Maybe just change it like this.

I'm Lelu Love, and I'm here to change your game. Come inside and see how I can do it for you.

Then the access button. And of course your photo. Don't lose that.

The video of you at the beginning would be enough to persuade anyone to sign up. Good combination of clips. A couple of times the framing cut off the top of your head but no worries. Was the guy with the condom your husband or not? Might have been more interesting if you had done that doggy style, with the camera at an angle to the side so you could explain who it was while he fucked you.

Or just turn around and let us see you riding him.

The preview clip finished early, I'm not sure why. Here's an idea for a close. You love the Acu Vibe and know what it can do for a girl, so after you have multi orgasmed into a sweat, tell the guys this is what they can share with you in the future. By joining.

What do you think?

Over all great site and you're a knock out. Wish we had met earlier in my life. LOL

Ps
Do you like girls? Might be a way to widen appeal.

Anyway wish you the best in the future and if you would like me to comment more, just ask. It would be a pleasure. As I said would love your response to my ideas.