So I watched the whole thing again today and here's my criticism of my work.
The framing is horrible, it's too loose in so many places. not sure if this is the viewer or more likely me. This is why I filmed the toys on the floor and being silly enough not too hide them. Sometimes I had in frame a chair leg in the back ground or too much of the back ground. I should of cropped tighter. There were times I could of twisted the camera slightly to frame Sandra better.
Also some of my movement is a bit too shaky. Out of practice and physical condition is my only excuse, should of shot it using a mono-pod. Another mistake. The camera noise is down to not having off camera mikes. Just heard me breathing hard.
My God it's far too long, 10 minutes in and it really hasn't got going yet.Take this up with Fabian. Solo girl IMO should be max 20 mins unless the scene is complex.
Going to get a coffee brewed.