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Lacks more creative placement of samples.. Only like 3-4 parts it seems like you actually took some time time to fuck with.. The beginning was alright until you had that huge ass eminem schpeel... I think typically about the first 20 seconds of a song are the intro or whatever, your lyrics started at 17 sec. so thats cool... The timing with eminems lyrics is kinda off.. but the shit with 50 cent, where you mixed it up a bit was cool.. maybe take some of his other songs and piece them together more to make some crazy shit...
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