I would highly suggest adding more kissing and make-out type stuff. True GG followers love that sensual aspect of that genre ... it's actually often why they are drawn to it
In the GG world it's not just about the "penetration" it's more often about a good build up as well. My 2 cents.
You choose two well followed girls from that side so that's a fantastic plus! I also think the reviews are a great idea!!!!!
xoxo,
Megan