I reviewed one of Reggie scenes and sent it to him. He agreed I could post it.
http://www.porn.com/porn-video/faye-...ani-95836.html
It start out nice, then it kind of gets too long
Some of the focusing is off and the fast cutting is making me dizzy, slow down.
Too close to the girls so they're bobbing in and out of focus.
OK the comedy is far too long. You have to understand the market that buys porn. The vast majority are guys who are afraid to ask a
girl in a bar, if she would like a drink. So girls lead porn scenes with the guy being pulled into it. This scenario is just off
putting and with the bad acting not getting my interest.
You're standing far too close to the people so you have a problem with their movements and focusing. Stand back and get all the
players in on the action. Try giving general directions of how the scenario works and see if the models have the brains to ad lib it.
If not shoot it in longer segments and give them instructions as you go along.
ACTION
The red head is giving the guy a BJ and her hair is over her face and his cock hiding the action. My first GF loved to give me BJs and
I knew I was in for one when she tied her hair back, in a scene with the girls leading they can do this.
Pussy cat in the room, get him out before the fucking starts.
At 11;20 the guy looks bored.!!!!!!
The blond girls character is plain annoying me.
24 minutes in and we're still on the BJ. This whole scene is far too long.
I don't know if the phone ringing was real or staged, but it could of been used so much better.
A dirty phone call while she's being fucked would of been awesome.
If the girl is on the guy on a sofa start with reverse cowgirl so we can see her face.
After 26 minutes I had seen enough.
The shooting is bad, angles poor, focusing terrible. What F stop were you shooting at?
The whole setting is too bland, too many pastel colors.
For me the scene doesn't work.
If you have 2 girls and 1 guy there are better scenarios.
1 girl is horny to fuck in front of her friend, who joins in the give a BJ
2 girls tease the guy into the action.
1 girl says her boyfriend is always telling her she gives lousy head and asks the other girl to teach her.
1 girl comes in to find the other 2 fucking. And joins in.
The guy comes in to see the 2 girls fucking. And joins in.
The guy is caught jerking off by his GF and her friend and they finish him off.
Etc. Etc. Etc.
The plots are endless, but it's always better if the girls lead the guy.
Setting the blond up as a bitch doesn't work unless she gets taught not to be a bitch.
Men who buy porn are scared of these girls.
The like the docile, compliant, willing, sex mad, instigators to make up for their lack of balls to ask a girl out on a date.