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Originally posted by ldinternet
OK, this is what I have; some personal information has been removed for obvious reasons. Little help please? 
My name is *(name)* and I'm *(number)* years old. I was born in *(country)* and I live near *(town)*. I study *(subject)* and *(subject)* at *(city)* University, although I don't like studying. In my spare time I enjoy cycling and computer games. I speak English and Japanese, although my Spanish is poor. My girlfriend is called *(name)*, we have been together for *(number)* years. I have one sister called *(name)*, but no brothers. My mother is called *(name)* and my father is called *(name)*. On Sunday my parents returned from holiday in Cyprus. My favourite snacks include pizza, chocolate and salty potato chips. In the future I'd like to travel and improve my Spanish.
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Mi nombre es [ldinternet's name] y tengo [your age] aņos. Naci en [country] y vivo cerca de [town]. Estudio [subject] y [subject*2] en la universidad de [city], aunque no me gusta estudiar.
En mi tiempo libre me gusta andar en bicicleta y jugar videojuegos. Hablo Ingles y Japones, pero mi espaņol es pobre.
Mi novia se llama [girlfriend name], estamos juntos desde hace [number] aņos. Tengo una hermana que se llama [sister name], pero no tengo hermanos. Mi madre se llama [mother's name] y mi padre se llama [father's name]
El domingo pasado mis padres vovlieron de sus vacaciones en Cyprus. Mis snacks[*] favoritos incluyen la pizza, el chocolate y las papas fritas.
En el futuro me gustaria viajar y mejorar mi Espaņol.
*= there's no translation for 'snack' we use it like that, but maybe your teacher is not familiar with slang or modern terms so you can replace that paragraph with:
"Mis comidas favoritas incluyen la pizza, el chocolate y las papas fritas."
*2= Your study subjects can and probably should be translated too, privacy freak
