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Originally Posted by Redrob
No it is not!
This is not Cliff Notes; this is the real thing. The document's' power is in the arguments; not, using "power phrases."
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Obviously my idea was not just to list them as that but incorporate them into full sentences to put emphasis on the actual problems surrounding the XXX, I believe the arguments is getting deluded as the letter is written more as a story teller mode rather than focusing on actual facts.
The power of the document is not to say please listen what I have to say but it's to say I know it, you know it, it's wrong