I read through parts of it and it appear a bit weak, phrases like: adult industry professionals are concerned about how much it would cost them to protect their
there should be more phrases like adult industry professionals are concerned about the financial hardship resulting from...... / unrealistic financial burden / forced donations to unregulated private organizations lead to biased opinions and corruption / separating a legal business from it's peers is first step of censorship / forcing consumers to be labelled with XXX may not be in the best interest of the consumers / unwanted analytics of online private behaviors / habits now available to ISP's, government agencies, employers.
Not a bad letter but I think it lacks the "power phrases"
Still good to see someone is doing something
