I'd suggest :
- A new hair style.
- Much better makeup
- New attitude in her face (smiles, confidence, maybe evil..)
- Completely shaven public area (Sorry but that giant bush is nasty)
- A little exercise to tighten things up.
- Some style
And you might have a winner.
And besides, there is something wrong with each of these pictures... I get the feeling that the photographer knows how to shoot, but just didn't know how to shoot her.
For example:
In this picture:
Why is there a stripper pole here? And why is she tied up? She's not tied to the poll so she can't dance on it anyway. And who is she looking at?
The girl has a larger butt, and this kind of mesh thing doesn't work at all. It looks too tight making her butt buldge out in places. Larger butts look better in larger panties, shorts or short skirts.
Bondage isn't my thing so I can't say if I like the pose or not, but the skin color is wierd. She's a little green in some spots and yellow/orange around the top of her chest / bottom of her neck. It makes her look sickly. Of course she's upside down so maybe thats what happens in real life, I don't know.
That huge bush is a big turn off for me but forgetting that, the next thing I see is her face. Maybe if instead of looking frumpy / pissed off / asleep, she might have tried a more "satisfied" expression. Her pose says that she's "ready to fuck" or "I've just been fucked" but her facial expression doesn't agree.
Nice Picture! Nice lighting! Nice costume Nice furniture! It's her makeup thats strange... Did you try to match the red of her dress and blue of the chair? If so, maybe, ok, I don't know, but... maybe there's too much of it?
Or maybe the color is just too saturated... how about this?
A little less reds and blues, a touch more greens, less saturation and a touch more contrast can bring out the goth in her.
Just a thought.