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RedShoe · 05-21-2003, 05:31 PM

needs more lesbians.

actually I think there are too many pix (I hate to say) I get lost in it's clutter of lesbians.

I'd move the vertical bar of lesbians to the side with the big girl image, and cover her with those images so we only see one tit, and it looks like she's kinda peeking out from behind it.

Then I'd DHTML those lower imaes with a 50% transparency/roolover.

Then I'd stretch it out a little so you can pump that text up more.

Also use a pixel text instead of making the regular font an image, that's why it gets just a little fuzzy on the edges. Pixel text does not.

Also check the gramar(sp?)
I'm not sure, but I think if you say "nets best kept secret" it's possessive and so it should look like "net's best..."

Also I don't know if "period" needs to be capatalized after a comma.

Also, don't call it lesbian content. When I hear content, I think it's something that I can see anywhere. Call it "the best lesbian sex.. or the best lesbian babes, or anything else... content just sounds weird to me.

Maybe incorporate the title in the text.

"Let these lesbians take over your world." or something like that.

But that's just me.. That's how I try to design.. best thing to do is try it out as is. If it works for you, cool go with it.

I'd definitely put in more eye contact shots, and lighten the image overload.

05-21-2003, 05:31 PM
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