Originally Posted by DirtyDanza

if I give you advise don't take it wrong way....

first the aim is not bad.. thats a good cumshot... but there are many factors wrong with that... ill cover 2 this post...

you have both hands free yet your using your right hand with camera placed on the same side as stroke hand.. mistake.. if thats the angle you use then you better learn to use your left hand... I know it may be weird at first but you will get used to it trust me........ you clear up the shot that way.. also you can face her twords camera rather than side profile... ( no one has a good looking side profile ) get yourself a whore that you bang all the time anyways... tell her come over and use her to practice with... you know the old saying.. practice makes perfect... well in porn it really does.. and well if your funding your own shoots practice can get costly ..... get yourself a whore.. and keep her around for a few months as a "regular" cheap style.. maybe even side project "solo girl" site that just "never takes off" for her percentage follow me? get 40-50 shoots in within a month - month and a half.. you will be surprised in how that will help you in shooting random girls... trust me....