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Originally Posted by ottopottomouse
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not keen on the overlap on charge and its box but it is a much more readable logo 
still not really sure about the squashed font used for the ingredients and am not sure if they are lines across? If so Quinoa - Tasty - Provides Energy dont line up.
left aligned text looks much better. not sure about the random capitalised words but havn't seen what other related products do on their text
is this going on health food shop shelves?
pick it up, read all the text, get to the bottom, put it back on the shelf. people need telling at the bottom of the text to buy it.
my only other comment is the blue colour is a bit like a hospital poster. i don't know if there is any research about on sucessful packaging colours - i just had a quick look and couldn't find anything useful but maybe i wasn't asking google the right questions.
good luck with it  |
thanks a ton for the feedback. i think those are good ideas/changes and doable. couple comments-
i've been concerned with the 3 heading across the top, they are not supposed to be relative to one another, but as stand-alone bullet points summarizing the key points of the product in the form of
product
features
benefits
i still want to do that but am unsure how to not have them interpreted as related. any thoughts on how to achieve that?
i still don't know why that font comes across squashed either, i didn't see the squashedness at 1st but now that you mention it, i can see that.
will proof-read again to deal with the Capitalization.
i agree on the closing comment, will add the following-
Experience nature's best- Take Charge and start living healthier, have more energy, feel better and look better today!
color-wise, blue/gold is considered to be the most successful color combo for closing sales, although i am not sure what shade of blue or if it's true for any shade of blue.
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