comments-
not keen on the overlap on charge and its box but it is a much more readable logo
still not really sure about the squashed font used for the ingredients and am not sure if they are lines across? If so
Quinoa - Tasty - Provides Energy dont line up.
left aligned text looks much better. not sure about the random capitalised words but havn't seen what other related products do on their text
is this going on health food shop shelves?
pick it up, read all the text, get to the bottom, put it back on the shelf. people need telling at the bottom of the text to buy it.
my only other comment is the blue colour is a bit like a hospital poster. i don't know if there is any research about on sucessful packaging colours - i just had a quick look and couldn't find anything useful but maybe i wasn't asking google the right questions.
image ^
good luck with it
