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Originally posted by DarkJedi
The second one got a good design but you need to work on your text. Everything there is pretty general and the surfer has already seen it thousand of times. Think up something unique and catchy.
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haha, my creative writing skillz need work! I just throw together some words that sound good and type them out.
THe second one has a good design but I think it might just be too professional. I like the bare nuts amateur style on the first one. It has some graphics but nothing like the second one. So far more conversions on the first one were sucking hard, so I came up with the first one to see if it was just the style!
Thanks guys!