DamianJ

I love it. I mean, I know you are fucking stupid and all, but to mis-spell a word on your own banner promoting your own site is brilliantly stupid. Well done.

Let's have a look at the site...

Ooh wow. It's like 1996 all over again! Brilliantly retro. I assume that is the look you were going for?

Sadly, I'm not too keen on your copy. I've gone through the first bit and had a look at it for you on my marketing blog. On the blog I give away free hints and tips for porn marketing and along with critiquing your site, I've also rewritten it for free. You may use all of that work for nothing.

Also, others will see how I might be able to help them make a affiliate site that stands out from the crowd.

http://www.adultmarketing.co.uk/2010...gspotcash-net/

You see, your copy (alongside the obvious litany of mistakes) doesn't really emphasise the things that would be of interest to an affiliate. The points you make are boring. Here's my version. What do you think?

?Hi and welcome to G-Spot Productions. I?m Gary and this horny lady is my wife Nat. We?ve been running our sites for over five years now and when it comes to amateur porn we know what sells. And we give it to you!

We?ve got 14 sites in our network, with more launching all the time. Every site is updated every single week, so your surfers will rebill and rebill and rebill.

Cos we do this for ourselves, you know you are going to get The Personal Touch. One of us is around 22 hours a day and we always will answer your calls ICQs or emails. When you make money, we make money so we really do care about helping you maximise your revenue, whatever time of day it is.

Along with the usual banners, page peels, FHGs we offer something special. Totally bespoke promo content. We?re small and swift. We can make you anything you want to promote our sites. Got a crazy idea involving whipped cream and midgets? Call us up an we?ll sort it out for you.

There is no big brains or company behind this operation, it?s just me, Gary and my sexy wife Nat. And we care passionately about making the best possible porn and making you the most money you can get. So sign up now and grab our content and start pushing hot ?n? horny Nat!?