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DamianJ · 06-18-2010, 10:31 AM

I hope you didn't pay for them!!

I will just tell you what is wrong with one.
Let's take the one for the programme.

Let's think about what you want to do. Promote a programme to webmasters and get them interested in promoting your sites. So, let's look at your message:

50/50 payout
Make 3pl Income
Promote Full HD 3D now
50% 50 Split for life
Market is going 3D
3D Full HD Converts

Well, here is what I think:

Make 3pl Income - you are making up words. what does 3PL mean? Looks like a typo

Promote Full HD 3D now - it's not Full HD, as you cannot get that online.

50% 50 Split for life - So, just the same as everyone else, but with added typos

Market is going 3D - No it isn't, even slightly, so you are really putting me off now just BSing

3D Full HD Converts - it's not full HD, and wow! you really thing saying your stuff converts works? EVERYONE says that.

So in short, you have actually alienated me before I have even seen your site. I would never, ever click on a banner like that.

One alternative creative:

1 - Old 3D red/green picture "Remember when 3D was like this?"

2 - "It doesn't work like that any more"

3 - Pic of your 3D stuff "Now it's 2010, don't your surfers deserve more?"

4 - "3D works in the cinema, and it works in porn."

5 - "Click to get your unique promo content NOW."

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Hope that helps

Damian

PS If you want me to sort the others out, get in touch.

06-18-2010, 10:31 AM
DamianJ Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A magical land Posts: 15,808	I hope you didn't pay for them!! I will just tell you what is wrong with one. Let's take the one for the programme. Let's think about what you want to do. Promote a programme to webmasters and get them interested in promoting your sites. So, let's look at your message: 50/50 payout Make 3pl Income Promote Full HD 3D now 50% 50 Split for life Market is going 3D 3D Full HD Converts Well, here is what I think: Make 3pl Income - you are making up words. what does 3PL mean? Looks like a typo Promote Full HD 3D now - it's not Full HD, as you cannot get that online. 50% 50 Split for life - So, just the same as everyone else, but with added typos Market is going 3D - No it isn't, even slightly, so you are really putting me off now just BSing 3D Full HD Converts - it's not full HD, and wow! you really thing saying your stuff converts works? EVERYONE says that. So in short, you have actually alienated me before I have even seen your site. I would never, ever click on a banner like that. One alternative creative: 1 - Old 3D red/green picture "Remember when 3D was like this?" 2 - "It doesn't work like that any more" 3 - Pic of your 3D stuff "Now it's 2010, don't your surfers deserve more?" 4 - "3D works in the cinema, and it works in porn." 5 - "Click to get your unique promo content NOW." -- Hope that helps Damian PS If you want me to sort the others out, get in touch.