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right where to begin
1) i wouldnt even read your copy, your layout and colour scheme is so bad i would have bounced back immediately
2) you claim to be an adult SEO, yet your on site SEO is of a very low standard, your html is poor and I don't want my pro SEO to be using a templated web page. that fills me with zero confidence.
3) even if i was to think about reading your copy, its not compelling. The first sentance is boring. it doesnt compel me to keep reading.
4) you mention 'we'. Either you mean 'I' or have a 'meet the team' page so i know you arent an I.
5) Don?t fall victim to English as a second language copywriting. - jesus h christ. I hope your being sarcastic.
6) A trusted name in SEO and Adult Copywriting - who is?
7) if I was crazy, I would want to contact you. How? Where is your contact form clearly linked too so i dont have to think?
8) Prices? I don't see any.
If you aren't a web site designer, go to the pros. Budget for around $500-1000 US and get a decent site designed for you.
If you have the skills, then you can easily earn that back.
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