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Originally Posted by kane
1. I was a little confused about what you were selling. Is it advice or porn or both? It looks like both, but to me the tour is a little unclear. I took it to mean the tour was mostly just a new slant on a porn site. If you are selling advice maybe you need to make it a little more clear.
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Another good point. Kind of steps in line with what I was at with the "thinness" comment and the getting more text in place.