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i think the design needs to get more fresh, maybe a bit of web 2.0 look with some punch ups of classic porn sales styling.
the buttons, nav areas, labels of signals, and header area all give me the feeling of old, including the type facing. get some css text and proper sizing for making what you want people to read, well pleasant to read.
also that line about no virgins, all models fucked, needs to go up top with some more suggestion, or even small semi-opaque caps from the hardcore.
interest starts at the top of the page.
oh, and if your teaching the how to pick up on the signals and execute,
Then perhaps "Women use body language to flirt and to seduce men." --> "Women use body langauge to flirt and get a response, learn how to read them, learn how to use them, learn how to close them"
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