I think it looks a nice site so well done if this is your first paysite. I would agree with earlier comments that you need to get your affiliate program sorted out and links to the program at the foot of all tour pages (rather than just an e-mail address).
You may also want to consider offering different pricing options - at the moment you only offer $23.95 / 30 days recurring. You may also want to offer a non-recurring 30 day option at a slightly higher price, as well as a 90 day non-recurring option at a slightly discounted price than if they paid monthly.
But overall, well done!
