Mmmm. That tour gives me wood!
The only thing I might suggest is possibly adding a text "join" link in between each set of sluts, or possibly after each description. For instance...
"I'Kayla is one of my cutest girls and I'm happy she's a part of my site. She looks so cute trying to take my entire dick in her young mouth and we had a really good time. She just turned 18 4mths ago and she's 5'4, 110 and a perky 34b. This bitch sucked my dick and swallowed my entire load... then say's "cum is nutritious"?? This is one of my best vid's!! See ya inside
Mike "
Then have a "Join us inside" or some text link right under each description caption, increasing the hits to the actual join page, where you can possibly close the deal without them even going to the next tour page.
But it still kicks ass as is!