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Originally Posted by georgeyw
That was tough to read. Written by someone else? posted by you hyped to hell argh bio's aren't written like a sales brochure....
Having said that - congrats on your success and all the best for the future.
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Explain, how it was tough to read? Any sections that stand out. That was actually put together very quickly for our site, i would love to have it revised. I'm not an English major so it looks fine to me besides certain details that were left out and or stuff that can be worded differently.