Thread: gramatical help needed
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Old 03-22-2003, 10:45 AM  
ZoiNk
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Quote:
Originally posted by Alessandro
thanks a lot ....

is it correct to say "on camera" ?



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Originally posted by ZoiNk
Check out this hottie. We were the only ones who were able to get her to strip naked in front of a camera, and I am sorry to say that we were the only ones that will ever be able to.

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can u say this on one short line ?

on camera is correct, but it sounds funny "in front of the camera" sounds better.

We were the only ones to get this hottie to pose naked in front of the camera

if you want a single line. The multi-line one will sell much better though.
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