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Improve the baseline (deeper/longer) to carry the melody.
Add something to the "i need you part" - to make the highlight chorus line stand out a little more - this is where she needs to go vocal and thump it out a little more in certain areas - instead of keeping it flat throughout. Will also make for a stronger finish. Maybe digitize everyother "I need you". At the end maybe also have the male vocal throw in a few I need you's. You also need throw in atleast one long/strong "i need you" in the song.
Vocal/digitization needs work in a few spots - for example i dont like how it sounds between 2:30-2:35.
At the end, take advantage of the duet, dude has a great voice. I never noticed a part where she sings a line, he sings a line, etc, and then they both go at it at the same time. That interaction would be a nice addition and closing.
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