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Great voice, but I agree - overly digitized
couple of things to poke at...
the " I need you" part sounds like it should be a long echo, almost like a call and response, main, and backup. They're too even. (Sleep by Conjure One is a good example.) The first in the pair needs to be stronger (louder?) Also, I wanted it to have some more tension - build... in the music for that part.
The transition to the bridge falls completely flat for me. Tension build is totally lost.
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