Originally Posted by sharphead

Well if we're critiquing grammar...

Yours:
Hi guys, I?m Nina, I just became legal this year and I finally got a chance to explore my naughty side. I always knew I liked girls, but only now I?m getting a chance to be able to show my love for girls for everyone to see? and I?m going to have lots of fun with it!

Mine:
Hi guys, I'm Nina and I just became legal this year! Now I finally get a chance to explore my naughty side. I have always liked girls, but now i'm getting an opportunity to show my love of girls for everyone to see... and I intend to have a lot of fun with it!

Maybe I suck as well... meh, but I think it sounds better.