Quote:
Originally Posted by sharphead
Well if we're critiquing grammar...
Yours:
Hi guys, I’m Nina, I just became legal this year and I finally got a chance to explore my naughty side. I always knew I liked girls, but only now I’m getting a chance to be able to show my love for girls for everyone to see… and I’m going to have lots of fun with it!
Mine:
Hi guys, I'm Nina and I just became legal this year! Now I finally get a chance to explore my naughty side. I have always liked girls, but now i'm getting a chance to show my love of girls for everyone to see... and I intend to have a lot of fun with it!
Maybe I suck as well... meh, but I think it sounds better.
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hows this?
Hey guys, I'm Nina and guess what?? I became legal this year! This means that i finally get a chance to be naughty and explore my little fantasy of making out with other girls in front of the camera for everyone to see! I'm going to have lots of fun this year..
something like that.lol