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Old 07-13-2008, 06:38 PM  
TyroneGoldberg
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it seems you're going for the partygirl niche. when was the last time you went clubbing? what do the girls drink? what kind of music? you can really write this up.

if you write 'this girl is hot and she shook her tailfeather' you'll lose me. you must really write in detail what it's like to see girls out clubbin
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