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Old 05-28-2008, 09:15 AM  
DeadFidel
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Originally Posted by selena View Post
It is not incorrect grammatically that I can see, but reads a little stilted, imho.

I personally would leave this sentence out all together:

"Her strange ability has been documented and will be published soon."

I assume the writer was trying to convey her ability to make you fall in love, etc, but strange ability can cover a lot of things, and some of them not good. ;)
How about The Witch Doctors Doughter, it'a a true story and it is real and strange.

Thanks for the feedback...

Oh ...and the dude that corrected my typo
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