http://www.pleasuredvds.com/gallerie...how/index.html
Here's Lenny's free gallery advice for the day.
You're using the word free too much. That used to work back in the day when free was rare, but everyone says free now so I think most TGP surfers ignore it. Try using sales text that tells the surfer what's unique about the site you're selling, and how its different and stands out from all of the other crap he's joined before.
Shit like free membership or 100,000 pics or 1000gigs of MPEGS just doesn't pull the clicks anymore. You need to find a "hook", an angle that you use to sell a site from.
The eye moves from left to right, not up and down. Think about that for awhile. Once you grasp that concept it will multiply your sales exponentially.