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Originally Posted by CarlosTheGaucho
Now here is my sample description - tell me what do you think:
Now this is some of the nastiest and wildest debauchery that ever happened in house, well we all are glad to meet new friends that we can fuck and these three couples sure DIDN't knew each before. Well a couple of shots in our club turns young and horny people in fuckbuddies easily.
Now what turned up was a MASSIVE orgy, all the cocks got sucked, all the girls got rammed and all of that wrapped up with the good old belly cumshot contest.
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"Now this is some of the nastiest and wildest debauchery that ever happened in house, well we all are glad to meet new friends that we can fuck and these three couples sure DIDN't
knew each before."
Is a run on sentence.
Fix with...
"Now this is some of the nastiest and wildest debauchery that has ever happened in house
! We all are glad to meet new friends that we can fuck! These three couples did not
know each other! Until, a couple of shots in our club that is. These shots turn young and horny people into fuck buddies easily."
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