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Honestly, that's pretty bad. Sentences are too long, wrong tenses, and it's really hard to follow. Here's my quick re-write of it:
Now this is some wild and nasty debauchery! These three couples didn't know each other before but things sped up quickly. After a few rounds of shots at the club, this young and horny group got intimate.
In the blink of an eye, drinking and dancing turned into a MASSIVE orgy. Cocks got sucked, chicks got rammed, and cum was flying from navel to face.
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