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I liked the teenie pleasures best..
so i'll point out what I saw..
globally:
the censoring is inconsistent from page to page..
the word "stink" is usually a turn off ; )
100s and 1000s tend to look better with apostrophes
the small blue text on the left, is maybe a bit too small..
the front page:
girl.. front and center.. gotta fix her color.
group sex is two words, or hyphenated.
not everyone knows what "DP" stands for.
elke-18 & rosa-18 coulda been cropped a bit better.
minor grammar issues.
page 2:
pics could use some color fixes.
minor grammar issues.
page3:
front and center pic, looks like her breast and arm were amputated..
front and center pic, scanlines if you must have them, are too intense.
front and center pic, color issues.
minor grammar issues.
join:
reused pics from earlier in tour..
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