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Originally Posted by TaylorMarieXXX
I caught the 'our' instead of 'are', also.
I know with my clients I do them a disservice if they have to go through and edit the writing I do for them. When you sell services as a writer it's imperative to edit all your work, especially posts.
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'This little babe starts of looking coy, but when she busts out her cute purple toy she exposes herself for the wanton little hotbox she is.'
You might want to fix this in the sample on your site as well. Just saying...
