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Old 02-16-2003, 11:08 AM  
lustbin
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Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: minnesota
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Okay.. I'm a newbie here still so i've been trying really hard not to talk smack .. and while I do appreciate you taking my galleries NJ, this site needs some more work.

Option 1: Trash it, start over.

Option 2:

Lose the hellfire red marbling. As-is it is built for 1024x768 and honestly it is very "geocities" or "tripod" looking. Maybe tripod is a better answer. Anyway,

Maybe this is petty, but those hilighting buttons remind me of something you could cut and paste out of some "Elite HTML Here" page. Maybe put together a new menu?

Make your sponsor links bigger on the top. Maybe a heading "Recommended Pay Sites" for them..?

Center that banner for "Amateur PayPerView" if you are going to have it there at all, though I'd replace that with a decent logo.

Red on black is hard to read.

The menu frame on the left is wasting space -- once you have this built for an 800x600 browser you won't have much real-estate left over for what you are actually offering. Try and find a better solution for that.

Fix your proportions for your links table.... It is only taking up pro-rata about 2/3rds of the frame it lives in- why not stretch it out a little if you are going to use frames at all?

Really NastyJack.. I'd trash it. I'm not a "designer" but I've done a little here and there. Shitcan it and start over.

I was just looking at orchid design's portfolio last night and they have some fantastic examples.....no i'm not affiliate in any way with them, I just liked what I saw. Go look there for some ideas.

Sorry, I don't like it. At all.

I'm not claiming to be the next TGP Picasso, so if you want to critique my site, have at it: http://www.thelustbin.com/

I'm going to just use it for now as a 404 landing page. Wrote some scripts that generates the whole mess daily out of a random bank of galleries I have.

Good luck NJ.
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