It's very out of date, lacks personality and the models look like porn stars without you selling them as porn stars.
If you want real glamour you have to go to someone like Micheal Ancher at
Glamour Girls and use his content in a tour. Then use the cookie cutter content inside.
I would say give it less text and concentrate on one or two things thing. Be a master of one trade rather than a jack of all trades.
Don't drop the price to a stage where you seem desperate or ripping people off.
But some good suggestions here, how many people completed the join form and got rejected, what kind of traffic?
Don't come to me for this kind of content, I don't shoot it. I shoot teens. But also represent people who shoot amateurs and glamour.
Try Joker Content or Mac Bumble, better shot stuff (IMHO) and less used on tours, I think.