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Well to sum that up and add two cents:
1) the font is too hard to read - most likely everyone will give up
2) the introduction text is all picture - will suck SE
3) the background is like from a personal depressed blog site or something - way too off the adult site and completely changes the first impression towards cold
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Ok now I refreshed that and it looks way better but:
1) the top menu is faded out too much
2) I would not push "contact" and "support" up to the top menu as it's unrelevant to the free surfer and rather add something as "bonus"
3) still lots of graphical text no SE option
4) "join now" link should be more transparent and dominate each block
5) I assume the textwork is not final yet because it uses so many webmaster slang words so it's almost like to persuade the webmasters to sign up
JOIN PAGE:
1) I would put the description text below the payment options
2) the best value options should stand out way more, also to make it like a poll (what do you choose?) would actually encourage more to CHOOSE and pay instead of esthetic but quite faded away links
That's my 2 cents well I only hope I will be smart enough to kick our brand new site to killer conversions..
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