RevengeBucks_Monica

I agree with Rockatansky, instead of showing a pic of the model's face, perhaps show a REALLY kickass feet/legs fetish type photo.

Also, when you get to the bottom after looking at the model's pics, there are no links there. You need some links for "more" or "join now!".

I think you need to work harder on your text. You have a paragraph of reasons why people should join, but it sounds a little too spammy... like you are trying too hard to sell it.

Try writing a paragraph about the site that just describes it, as if you were telling us what's in the site. Then see if you can spiff it up a bit to make sales.

Or, try writing a list of points that are bulleted instead. People like lists, they're easier and faster to read than a paragraph.

I personally don't believe you need a new layout and design. I think you are on the right track. Lots of amateur looking designs sell very well.

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