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Well.. if you want honesty - here is my take on the video
1) Turn off the automatic focus !! The camera is having a hard time finding you and there are several fuzzy scenes that shouldn't be there.
2) Lighting really needs to be addressed especially near the end where you have sun spots and flares
3) Location, Location, Location. I don't mind outside shots but the mirror behind the chair and other items around really shows that no a great deal of thought went behind the set up for the video. Find a larger outdoor patio or better scenery for backdrop.
4) Male camera man? It's the only way I can assume the shaking of the camera is that he was attempting to jerk off watching the action. Try again to find a camera or something to compensate.
You truly love what your doing, and that is what sells. The scene is hot and the passion shows through the lense. Just step up the camera and set-up (basics) and you will have a winner.
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