I would get them professionally made. It will almost always lead to at least a higher CTR. You have too much text, pretty much only women read the text from my experience. Short headliners work better.
I tell my friends to surf something and I watch them. They never read. They are bumbling horny asses clicking pics.
Remember, women run off of emotions and guys run off of logic. Far more guys surf your type of content so you should be targeting the guys.
http://www.adultgalleryservice.com/
Does a descent job. He did this one for me.
http://www.sexinfinity.net/galleries/0214.html
Not the best, but probably better than what I would have come up with. His rates are fair. Tell him Shaggy sent ya.