Hmmmm....The sites look good but some Link List owners might not use them. For one limit the use of hardcore content on your index/warning page. You should have a separate title for each freesite that does not have the paysites name in it. Also the gallery links on your menu page only go to a HG not a separate gallery within the freesites directory. That is a big no no in the Link List community.
Just my
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