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Good stuff, but if you are open to a bit of constructive criticism; Your opening sentence is a tad informal. For all I know, that is how your school like it. However, just changing a couple things makes it (in my eyes anyway) a bit better.
Instead of:
Ever wished you could fix societies problem in a matter of a second? Ever dreamed that we could restore our environment and clean all the pollution?
How about?:
Have you ever wished you could fix society's problems in a matter of seconds or reverse the damages of environmental polution?
If you are doing the old padding out the word count thing I more than understand. However, just a few other things; starting sentences with 'But' (But recently I found....) is tricky and has to be done with care. In fact, if you take the 'but' off of that sentence it because considerably stronger.
The only other thing I would ask is; Are you encouraged to write essays in first person?
Not knocking in anyway, I just finished a double major degree and have writen more essays than I ever wish to see again in my entire life. Just trying to lend a helping hand.
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