the one thing that i can already tell you need right off the bat is a lot more high res pictures on a tour... touch them up if necessary
a nice intro trailer couldnt hurt either, show people who you really are
the current trailer is way too dark, not enough to 'catch' the eye really... its fancy but looks like it would fit an alt girl better
you're selling YOU so make it look that way
good luck, if u want to chat hit me up