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Old 03-23-2007, 10:31 PM  
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Erotic text seems to be a style of adult writing, rather than just that Erotic is X - or softcore in nature. I find they often over explain some sexual details because they are trying to sound sexual. Adult Paysites, which are clearly for men, have this style of stories.


To me Men are easy to write for. The promo text/stories & ads show what men like. Cut the fluff, hit the hardcore, simple bursts of hardcore/erotic direct text - explain the chick/ass/tits, his dick & her pussy, and how good this fuck will be/is/was.

This is what guys think, so stories like it work, " Sandy has a tight little fine ass, cups under, umm.. and you can just dream of laying her tight, white little panties on the bed, and just ripping into that fine little dripping wet pussy.... Just hope nobody sees me wankin to her in the bushes."
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