|
HAHA.. Its interesting... Gives hope to smaller to average guys all over!
My only comments are.. Enless you are goin for only a Chinese or asian audience I would cut out the parts about the girls always "dreaming" of fucking an asian guy.. Thats (no offence) almost too comical to hear the girls going on about and seems WAY too staged.. Its pushing it to hear the girls talk about it on big cock sites but at least that seems a little more feasible since there are known size queens...
Also I would cut back on him talking only in Chinese while fucking or getting blown.. Its funny at 1st and would still have him do it at times and maybe have subtitles on the better lines but besides that it gets too distracting for me at least when he was going on and on in Chinese...
Those are my :twocents .. Take them or leave them.. I think it will sell to someone ether way.. Enough other funny and off the wall stuff does with the right site and promotion..
|