Originally Posted by Fluid

here's my thoughts..for what they're worth.

Make some eye contact. People want to see what they're buying, and if you're amateur, you're selling you. Not only your body, and sex acts, but your personality too and so much of that can come through the eyes. At the very least, they'd show that you're enjoying what you're doing (or gagging so hard your eyes water) and that goes a LONG way ;)

Not to be insulting, but the pic on the left looks like cousin IT. Unless you're working the long hair niche, I'd pic a shot that shows your face, or at least your best features.

Also..it's pretty sparse. This is an ad right? You're paying for every KB of data you load (assuming you're not freehosted) so why would you load a KB that isn't promoting you? Magazine ads don't have dead space, neither do smart retail stores, your headers and banners shouldn't either. Get as much of your "product" in front of the surfer as you can ;)

As far as picture quality, I'd start hitting up a board like amateur masters and look for other amateurs in your area that you could do content swaps with in return for photo services. It's a low cost way of increasing your exposure and getting higher quality content shot.